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Neon Sign Live
I wrote a poem yesterday, and have now edited it to make it better, can you tell me what you think?
Forgotten wrappers stain the floor,
a neon sign, a creaking door
Here is where we set our scene,
Downtown Manhattan,
The motel of dreams.
Fairy lights brighten her skies,
Cigarette butts, like fireflies
A young girl collapsed onto a bed
A thin floral sheet covers her head
Her story cluttered, her history cold
She was barely 16 years old
She lay there and shed the light
Of how she’d come to this horrible place,
On this warm September night
She wishes for a different life,
Born in bliss and not of strife,
Not to live life in one big flash,
Of tainted flesh and cheap cash
The compass of her mind still span
Dreaming of a never land
Where love could last her all her life
Not a phone call, a fumble, one cheap night
She longed to feel true passion
She longed to feel a flame
But all she felt were groping hands
Feeling the nights away.
how do i make it better?
Well, wrappers don't stain floors they litter them. You need to rhyme place if you're going to make this a rhyming poem and put it in the right place. I can understand now that she's a runaway seeking love and is possibly caught in prostitution? Or that's what is coming across to me. The compass of her mind still spans is correct not span-that's a forced rhyme and it doesn't sound good. You need to be consistent with your poem because as I'm reading it, it sort of falls apart at the end. It stops rhyming. Feeling the nights away doesn't work.
Try again. Remember, don't stop writing just because I found some problems with your poem. You're a beginner and you have to learn. I had to learn too. I'm trying to help you not be mean. Try it again and remember to ask your English teacher for some help. I'm sure she'll help if she sees you like to write. I did this and got a lot of good advise.
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Neon Live Nudes Sign Bar Game Room Frat Party Light REAL NEON GLASS TUBING | |
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US $33.95 | 20d 1h 10m |
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Z79 miller light high life beer bar Neon light Sign BIG | |
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US $89.99 | 26d 19h 8m |
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tp-tm Name Personalized Custom Marijuana High Life Bar Beer Neon Sign | |
0 Bid | US $9.99 | 1h 38m |
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a217-r Dr. Pepper Drink Good For Life Neon Light Sign | |
0 Bid | US $9.99 | 2h 52m |
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i468-b Jazz Bar Music Live Pub Club NEW Neon Light Sign | |
0 Bid | US $9.99 | 4h 53m |
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i546-b Live Music Bar Lounge Club Beer Neon Light Sign | |
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US $28.99 | 26d 12h 51m |
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e006-g Marijuana Hemp Leaf High Life NR Neon Light Sign | |
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US $28.99 | 26d 10h 40m |
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j041-b Biker Lives here with his old Hog Neon Sign | |
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US $28.99 | 26d 10h 34m |
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Miller HIGH LIFE Logo Beer Bar Pub Neon Light Sign K37 | |
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US $124.99 | 27d 12h 25m |
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j015-g Marijuana High Life Get a Bong Neon Light Sign | |
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Neon Live Nudes Sign Frat Party Game Room Light REAL NEON GLASS TUBING | |
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Live Nudes & Pinup Girl LED Neon Light Sign *Motion* | |
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MILLER HIGH LIFE BEER LIGHT UP SIGN " NOT NEON " MANCAVE BARWARE RESTAURANT BAR | |
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Neon Nights ? Live At Wacken $9.49 Neon Nights ? Live At Wacken |
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Neon Cafe Sign $299.99 A.B. Neon Cafe Sign - Art on Acrylic |
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Marilyn Monroe Perfume Neon and LED Sign - by Neonetics $159 Fans of classic Hollywood take note! This huge lighted print of Marilyn Monroe a grand tribute to an amazing talent. Purple hand blown neon and LED's light up this framed print. Black frame houses all the electronics. On/off switch on the white AC adapter. Great for the gameroom, Rec room, entertainment center. The neon and LED lights last upwards of 10 years. This Hollywood Legend will live forever. mixed media : neon ,plastic ,wood ,LED diodes poster. |
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Wayne Hancock - Thunderstorms and Neon Signs (live)
Poems live forever, not so little boys...would you like a seat?
*****
Cafe Euwaite
Neon OPEN sign tilts in the window,
Torn green umbrella, flower pots empty,
Café Macabre lunchtime special prices,
Remade soup d’jour, chilled bat brain compote,
Salad of new mown hay with salt water,
Mocha Represso, bad telling tea leaves,
Nameless meat sandwiched with wilted lettuce,
Condiments thick red, flavorless mustard,
Jellied desert, brown mounded form,
How much, the tab for this indigestion?
And the tip for the author, “Find a profession.”
*****
You know, you're really good. Bat brain compote. Where do you get this stuff? Mocha Represso?!? Oh, there's a question here. Yes, I'd like a seat, gimme some of that mystery meat and some Pepto Dismal.
Dragons live forever, not so little Jackie Paper.
